I'm working on adding some breaks on the paragraphs, because you're right it makes a little weird and tiring to read, and I completely forgot to put it.
Thanks for the correction, I'll try to clean up the writing of the prologue and I found someone to mark the mistakes before I publish the chapters.
Hi! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!
Yes, this part of the prologue is very to the point. I didn't really stop to think about it, but I went to see the second part that I wrote, and it is more in paragraph format than the released part. I think it's because I had more things to write about, like character descriptions, enviorement and etc. But I'll take a better look at it and try to improve it for the next update!
Yes, I realized that error only when i went to bed kkkk I changed the variable's name, because of the mc's pronouns, so Isma's part wasn't working . I fix it now! Thanks
I'm really glad you liked it!! Roxanne is totally a Gothel kk I'm glad that the typos did not interfere with the reading , I'll take a look at it again but if you see any typos you can totally tell me, It helps a lot. :)
And last but not less important...Levi might be bad...
but not as bad as the fall they will have for you. β₯
