I have to say the story was well done! The characters were well conveyed, the mc was relatable and the whole situation with the grandma was sad because that kind of thing happens a lot.
I really liked how you intertwined the whole idea of Halloween in the middle of the tale, so great job on that area!
The audio and music were serviceable, and the art was pretty good as well.
The art complimented the story and the use of animations I thought was done in an effective and dramatic way.
Great job overall!