The look of the game is spot on and does what it needs to. Unfortunately, I had a real hard time with the story, which took some strange (to me) turns, or left out information that I wanted to have as a reader/player. The choices presented were limited and while they might have had different outcomes, they didn't seem like they were pivotal to the progression of the story.
Thanks for putting this together - I hope you had a good time working on the project and continue to work on it going forward.