This was outstanding! Very, very creepy. The dream sequences kept me on edge, and how mundane most of the story was had me constantly waiting for the shoe to drop. And when it did, I wasn't prepared at all!
The sprites and backgrounds here are truly fantastic, and the very unique CGs during the dream sequences were very cool looking. And of course, I was really impressed by the writing; knowing how it ends really re contextualizes a lot of what happened prior.
I think I'll be giving this one another read through, and a recommendation to my friends; it makes for a perfect Halloween season read!