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WOW. Absolutely stunning delivery, my heart was in my throat the whole time. I love the character designs, the UI, the music, the story, everything felt seamless and I was completely immersed.

Pavel is so sweet, and I could absolutely relate to him, doodling in the corners of my books growing up. This reminds me of some brutal schooling systems in asia, especially the callousness of Angie. I was put right in the head of an overachiever academic and her reflections as she considered the career she had at stake and her morals were just SO GOOD!

At first, I thought the various media seemed tedious but it gave SUCH A POWERFUL FEELING when I was waiting for Pavel after processing

What a horrible term, processing. The clinical speak and whole tone of the story just click so well, and seeing Dr Deidre reflect through various media made it all the stronger

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Thank you so much! I'm very glad protoViolence's story and presentation could leave an impact on you like this - especially Pavel. He's a good boy at heart!

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I'm glad the document reading worked as intended too. I wanted readers to get into the rhythm of reading a lot of documents for the first two story parts - only to have that routine broken when the third story part withholds information from them.  

And yeah... "processing" is a horrible term, isn't it? Such a clinical term for something so invasive and life-changing... Which was the intent, of course. ;>