I really like the concept and theme!
Body snatching via eye contact is a good backdrop for a choose-your-own-adventure story. The story is well-written and descriptive.
My one critique is that there were a lot of dead-ends to the story and no way to go back to the previous decision point besides restarting the whole thing. I think it would’ve been better to have fewer branching paths which would lead to more complete endings.
Good job!