Really awesome job on this!
The art really tied the story together and I was thoroughly interested in seeing the end. The bittersweet ending got me, and I definitely felt like I got a small glimpse into your characters’ lives.
From a technical standpoint, it would help legibility if you added a text box behind the text. The white text was occasionally hard to read on the art.
Overall, great job on this, definitely my favorite of the jam so far!