Thank you very much for your comment! :]
I really appreciate this kind of criticism! It helps me a lot to notice things that I wouldn't otherwise take into account. ๐ธ
I've already fixed the beginning, rearranging Adam's monologue a bit. I also adapted the prologue so that the characters have more development when they are introduced :D
There will be routes, yes! Plus little secrets and many 'side stories' in each one! :3
Eddy and Leo are my favorites, so I don't see why not start with my doggo ๐ hehe