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Thank you very much for your comment! :] 

I really appreciate this kind of criticism! It helps me a lot to notice things that I wouldn't otherwise take into account. ๐Ÿ˜ธ

I've already fixed the beginning, rearranging Adam's monologue a bit. I also adapted the prologue so that the characters have more development when they are introduced :D

There will be routes, yes! Plus little secrets and many 'side stories' in each one! :3

Eddy and Leo are my favorites, so I don't see why not start with my doggo ๐Ÿ˜ hehe

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No problem ๐Ÿ™‚ always happy to help another writer. I think xour VN has a lot of potential! ๐Ÿ˜ The sprites are cute and the story's fun, so I'm eager to see where xou might take this~

Sounds great! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Looking forward to the changes xou've made and even more so to spend time with each of the boys~ ๐Ÿ˜‹ keep up the good work!