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Hi, I firstly want to start off by saying how truly wonderful this Visual Novel was to read. I spent almost 12 hours straight just reading through the 3 paths. I've been sick, so it was a great distraction from that. I absolutely loved it, and I have a few quick questions I'd like to ask. If they're things you don't wish to reveal or simply don't have an answer for yet, I totally get it. I also apologize if you've been asked these questions before.

1: Will each ending of the paths have continuations, or only the good/neutral? The bad/worst endings didn't really seem to have much of an opportunity to fix things in later chapters. I also can't imagine how much work it would be to have the paths diverging that much.

2: I noticed my playtime for Tate's path alone was slightly more than both Aiden and Dallan combined (not that I'm complaining. I like long stories). I think the best way I can describe it is that Tate's path felt like its own standalone novel. The other paths were great, but are there plans to maybe expand them a bit to be more in line with the quality of Tate's? I feel like Aiden's route could use a face-lift the most. I am very intrigued by his character and very much desire more.

3: Why the fuck is Oliver so cute? Like, I thought I had a thing for the small, shy type before, but Oliver easily takes the cake. For real though, I'm amazed at just how much the side characters shine and stand on their own in this VN. It makes the world feel a lot more alive to have them more present instead of just being plot devices. I guess this one was less a question and more just some praise.

I genuinely want to thank you for creating this VN. It genuinely might be the best one I've read yet. Absolute 11/10!

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Hey there, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! No better medicine than some nice smut with plot :3

Yes, the paths will continue from the best outcome, and most importantly all of them will contain spoilers from all the routes in chapter one, so good thing you're up to date :]

Tate's story was easy to write for some reason, but he still has a lot of development to go through in the next chapter. Aiden will absolutely get a rework, there are many things I don't like about it and yes, it is too short. Dallan will also get a bit more content but nothing major. Ultimately Tate's route will remain the longest one of the bunch, even counting the last route, but not by a landslide.

I love designing side characters so I can feed the reader all the spicy content without actually rushing in with the love interests. Oliver is definitely one of the best bois out there. :) A surprising amount of people are either kind of indifferent towards him or absolutely adore him, but nobody can hate that adorable anxiety ball.

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Bro I Read Novels in 20 Hours a Day and Only Have 4 Hours of Sleep Waiting For Updates Like Hell And That's Just Hard Man, But Can't Help it It's Just The Stories and Art Is Sooo Good Well Can't Really Do Anything since I'm a Shut In