I totally get the "chaotic" sound you were going for! I really like that you've done it in a way that isn't overwhelming, but almost motivating the listener. I see what you mean about some of the parts being a bit sporadic, so I wonder if more small transitions might help bring them together more. My favourite parts are when the crows come in with the slower, reflective kind of chords in between the chaos. Great work!!
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Thank you very much! The motivating comment is very interesting, I hadn't really considered that before to be honest. And thank you for the suggestions for the transitions, I'll try to see what I can do to make them fit better. I'm very glad you enjoy the crows, they seem to be very popular which is very encouraging.