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I got killed by the cop. The most difficult part of the game is that I am not always sure what my actions will do (does not answering mean I'm silent, or am I saying "yes"?), or even which response is negative or positive (ex. "Did you never do X" could be answered as "No, I never did X" or "No, I indeed did X"). In the case of the cop scene, my logic was "Well, since I don't have the option the drop the knife, I'll say 'No' since it's not possible". I think reworking the dialogue or just going to the "hands up" dialogue regardless of the player's choice could help. With "hands up", you're probably not going to say "no" to that. Plus, it still works if you're holding a knife.

One other minor thing was that it took me awhile to figure out that I was supposed to let the "no" run out for some dialogue. At first, I just assumed that it would give me a game over. Maybe changing the start screen to where you have the let it run out (instead of clicking) would help? This could just me a "me issue" though.

I really enjoyed your game and it's one of my favorites from this jam. I hope my feedback can be of some help.

The game was great! The cop scene wasn't to bad, realised I could fail if I did it wrong [or I assumed I could fail]

Comedy was good, and the angry detective jumpscare was weird/funny.

Also, is it possible to refuse the toaster?

I saw this on a stream before I played it so I am biased but the first time I played it I got through the cop scene okay. I tried it again on purpose and the one shot does seem quite harsh. I think if that had been my first experience I may not have realised there was more to the game or not wanted to go through the start again. The 2nd time I did all the opposite choices to the first time and you have added a lot of content in there nice job. 

I really like that the no concept is introduced in the menu. The part that I was not sure of was when I left it run out what my response was. Giving a triple refund could have been that I was saying yes or that I was just silently agreeing so I was not sure then. In the managers song it definitely seemed like I was just staying silent. In the interrogation it seemed like I was saying yes but I guess silence works there too. Maybe if someone commented directly on the response near the start like 'nothing to say aye' or something along those lines it would help explain exactly what the consequence of doing it is.