-Intro is pretty iffy, it feels too personal for an intro to the world. Depending on how the rest of the writing is handled it is either fine or a sore point.
-The area to switch between drawer and android isn't obvious. It should either be pointed out directly in the tutorial or have a double arrow type icon or something as UI.
-I like the use of the phone to choose a custom music playlist.
-I'm a bit confused, it tells me to use the program on it but I can't find it. I also accidently changed the (coolant?) without meaning to once or twice. At best I have recorded the cleaning program onto the ram and put that into the single-use device. After that I can't figure out what to do.
-I only just barely found it, the hitbox on the port was super tiny. I will note that in general the hitboxes are quite small, though I am playing in windowed mode so that doesn't help.
-Oh that's the end I guess. I don't really play that many VN + work a job games but I think this could have promise. I would just hope there would be more gameplay than what was shown.