ive found this IF yesterday and waited for chap 4 to be released so i can read it all so im really excited for that, also on the games little description thing, you forgot the "On" in the "let me take you on an adventure" bit. idk if that makes sense.
(its a tiny mistake and im not trying to be annoying, i promise. and if it comes off as annoying then i apologise.) but yeah i cant wait to read it.