Thank you for the feedback! Of course I'll try out your work, thank you for sharing it!
I'm really happy you liked my writing style, and I hope you'll be happily informed that after this little project I committed to using entirely original assets for my VNs (however bad they may be T_T). Monosoul is my first original, and I'm currently working on another!
Thank you for your advice too, I'll try to incorporate different transitions for the upcoming project and see how that turns out :>
~ Lufas