Hi! As it is now, it took about 10 minutes to complete - in which time, I didn't feel bored or like anything was dragging. The pace was fun!
The UI is so interesting, it's cooool! I think it did a lot for the slice of story presented, it gives off a regal - and somewhat too orderly fashion, which is good! I think it maintains the anticipation of something happening 'under the surface'.
I'm curious to see if the final result will still have the same art style or something different, and how that contrasts with the UI to create the particular atmosphere you have in mind. :>
And the characters were fine, I didn't dislike any. Personally I don't very much like too much inner monologue, but! Using it for exposition on the walk to school was a good way to bring the player into the frame of the player character.
Overall, fun! The anticipation of knowing there is going to be a breaking point, or suspenseful moment(s) really got me interested.
- [ I will happily take time to play it once finalised, or any other slices of progress are released. ] - :)
~Lufas