Hi Nick!
I love the rhythm of the octavo melody on the piano, it's surprisingly : stable at the beginning, accelerating and ending with a glissando that gives it a tragic color. Nice idea to let the melody breathe for 4 bars afterwards. It's something I don't allow myself to do, and listening to your piece, I realize that it works well.
I'm also impressed by the sounds you manage to create with musescore. The sixteenth-note piano is brilliant and add a spooky mood.
As a small detail, on the repeat of the beat at bar 33, you could have used a crash like you did at 41. That would have given it a bit more punch.
Bravo too for the mix and the dynamics of the different instruments. You've really worked hard on it, and the result is audible.
Of course, the theme is perfectly respected and the atmosphere is great.
As usual: great Nick!