I'm not really sure how to rate this, I'm not sure if I'm opening it correctly but it opens in a development build and the character just slides around. I did read the backstory however and it sounds really interesting!
yes i think its working correctly and im just starting out with unity and c# so this is all I can add with my current skill (sorry if its bad)
Don't be sorry! And it's not bad! You're far better at it than I am and everyone starts somewhere. Keep going! :)