As for my screenshot >> I've been there, done that xDD So I rly had to laugh there ^^ But anyways.. I wanted to have a quick look into this VN game and I must say.. the art looks pretty neat! ^^ I sure didn't expect to see characters in underwear or bare-chested (woman and man) in this and also not this early, it looked nice tho :D The setting is pretty unique with the coming next ice age and trying to be ready for it/overcome it, but still... as soon as those chars were presented like.. like that.. I was like... uaaa way hello there haha ANYWAYS, I do read a lot of VNs and there is a thing that bothers me and that is: the text could be a bit more detailed or lets say, more novel-like. To me, the text is kinda too fast-paced and a bit tersely, which destroys a bit of the immersion and the feel of reading a novel. I dunno, it is hard to explain what I mean. But that's that, and I think there are some typing or grammar errors in it too, which also bothered me a bit and is an issue for me in a VN. These are my honest thoughts, my honest opinion ^^ So.. sadly, despite I do like the art and I would welcome this different setting, I can't rly get into it "^^
Hi KuruChan, we really appreciate your suggestions. This demo is a minimum viable product developed on a budget, our focus was to show all important points within a short narrative arc. If our crowdfunding campaign is successful, we are going to invest much more in narration, so you are going to get a much more fulfilling experience. Considering this is our really first project, we wanted to show our competences before asking gamers to fund It. We hope you will follow our project, we really appreciate your review!