I really appreciate the feedback! I'm pretty new to writing visual novels. The only experience I have with them is playing them and also an attempt at a mod for DDLC years ago. As for the story, while I do know the overall direction I want the story to go, I don't have the small details planned yet. I'll try to work on the writing a bit and keep your thoughts on my narration in mind. I plan to have my next update finished in a little over a week, so if you wouldn't mind playing through it again if you have time, I would be grateful!