Smooth controls, Really like your title art and the mood of the game is well done. Didn't get to the end however as I fell in once, miss jumped once and after the third flower collection on the third attempt I stood on the edge and was looking out trying to peek the monster and it got me without seeing it. If there was a save on each flower I would of pushed on but became a little repetitive to keep going back to the start.
It was a good entry though and the movement and camera was solid.