Artstyle is really good, solid work. Music has highlights but overall has very uneven quality. I cannot say much about the story, I guess I need to play part one and two first.
Lack of collision with enemies in combat is a problem, as is the lack of feedback when an enemy gets hit. I am not sure how important the combat is to the overall story you want to craft however, this seems to be something more narrative-driven and episodic.