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Dante pulls you into his arms, enveloping you in his constant warmth. (after choosing not to share a bed and trying to move away from him)

"Here. Take my hand."
You do, feeling him grip your hand tightly but gently before helping you out the wide window and onto the roof, keeping a hold on you.  (No hesitation? Sometimes it feels like my own MC doesn't even know they're touch adverse)

Basically he whole of chapter 5, which wouldn't be a problem if MC actually spoke on it more or showed actual discomfort; creating some sort of understanding with Dante and any of the other characters, that they need permission. 

I hope I don't sound mean, i never want to come off nasty to any of you writers/authors. Chapter 1 was great in that regard, it was actually acknowledged multiple times. But idk, I just think the best option would be to remove it as a whole. That way the people who pick it, don't get such a shock when the plot comes into play.

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You're right!! I think at the moment alot of the options come out short and straight up ignored die to time limitations on my part as a whole but that this is ultimately a demo and there are various things I need to rework at a later date, but I do thank you for pointing that out.