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The game feels strange for several reasons:

- there are no sounds or music, which makes what is happening a strange silent movie

- the idea seems strange plot-wise, which is not always a bad thing, but I would add more humor to make the situation even more absurd. For example, you can add people who fall out of the balloon when it turns upside down.

- I like that the boat is not convenient to control - it makes the game process less trivial

- I would add some kind of opportunity for the player to push the balloon up, for example with hot steam from a ship’s chimney

- I don't like that the ball flies off the screen and the player has to play blindly outside the camera - it's not fun and feels like a bug. You can give the balloon the ability to bounce off walls, or let it be immediately struck by lightning or eaten by a huge whale - anyway, the game ends immediately when the balloon leaves the screen.

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Thank you, this is the best feedback I've ever got on my games. I appreciate it!