Thank you for the feedback!
You say it took you some time to get into the story, is it because it drags on too long before getting to the point? Or was the writing just not that entertaining?
The writing entertaining, else I would have not appreciated so you can be assured the writing style is great.
I would say because it takes too long with no big plot event and it doesn't really escalate ( like getting sad and sadder until the scene with the professor arrive for example ) the mood goes up and down but with no real big up so you're waiting for It to happens. It's all good for setting up places / characters / maybe story element but since it drags a lot on scene that can be viewed as non important (unless it will get important later ) it feels a bit long. Nevertheless it's good to get to know Hannah as a character but by doing so it's like getting lost along the way when you walk in a park before you finally see the thing you were searching for.
If I can resume it better : There is a lot micro events happening that feels like it should be important but don't feel important until the big event arrive.