Bravo! This rules, and is my favourite thing I've seen from this game jam so far. You use the legend very smartly, you wield the second person like a pro, and there're some lovely choices about exactly what text readers must click here—one of the things I look for most in Twine projects. I am one of nature's quibblers, and a handful of times I felt tempted to quibble about this or that word-choice or syntactic path. But overall, this is great: thank you for writing it!