I think you have some truly visually stunning moments in this game. Amateur 3D games can have a certain unappealing look to them but you use the medium in a way that plays into the rougher edges and maintain a graphically coherent gaming experience.
I really enjoyed play-testing your game and I felt invested in your story which I thought was poetic. I wish I could've eased in/lingered in those story moments a little more as I felt confusingly thrust into them instead.