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AAAHHH I'M SO LATE! 

sorry for being so tardy. 
Anyway, You've done it again, I'm absolutely blown away by everything you've wrote and THE MUSIC, oh the music is always top notch, I'll be waiting for day 4 AFTER the Christmas vacation's are over, so Kideshi I ask of you not to be so hard on yourself and get a nice winter vacation.

[SPOILERS AHEAD]
So first of all, I love the cooking tutorial with seth giving us a Kalightian Culinary class instead of the usual Biology one, which I still adore.
I hope we'll have more time to cook and eat whatever Seth and Neo made, especially if Seth will bend over every time to pick up a utensil~
hopefully though, next time we won't have to bleed by thinking of negative memory to get the sizzling started.

Oh my, the Endomycha scene, at least we got some new info about Seth's past and ahem kink cough* and by the way, I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but is the "sexy color gray" supposed to be a reference to 50 shades of gray? Either way *Vomits*

Hope you like the magazine I found laying on the ground of the treasure room. (That Demented shark on the ceiling gave me a such a scare that I stumbled down and found myself face to face on this very explicit magazine.)

Returning to the Endomycha scene, man oh man, The Jaw Divers are gonna have additional trauma on top of what they had plus I didn't expect that being horny woudld save us, but I ain't complaining especially with the view that I got~ *Whistle* I gotta give it to ya, those were some nice assets and rods that you've shown us, alas, if I could only touch them instead of just our own... nontheless, thanks for the show.

Now, talking about the music...
"Touch Me Lullaby" is such a song that I could describe such as a simple "laying in bed and listening to the rain outside hitting the glass accompanied by a broken Vinyl playing in the background" but I must interpret what I saw or felt during that lullaby.
It starts with a nice melody accompanied by a sound in the background that could be paragonized as the sound of the rain, soon after if I listen intently, I think I hear someone humming, now I'm envisioning 2 people that may be the same but not quite. The sound of the rain now is accompanied by a rumbling of a machine, the 2 of them are inside the car and as the young one sits in the back humming that song, the car moves faster and faster until it goes off from a bridge or a cliff and suddenly the melody becomes dull, like someone was drowning it, submerged into the water and it's not constant, It's like having brief flashes of memories of what happened before it all crashed down, repeating that nice lullaby on loop.
Sorry if I'm killing the mood like Reub'o but I just hope you've healed from whatever happened in year 12.

From what you've written anger seemed to be the solution against being depressed, and it might be a good one at the start but anger usually subsides after a short period of time, therefore Lust was the next solution which was more constant as we have more stuff to be horny instead of being angry at one thing for so long, yet I can't help that by the last part you've written, Companionship was the best thing someone like Neo could've ever got, especially since it's people who understand him, It's nice, I've quite teared up at that point. As always great job, You've created yourself a beautiful cult.
I'll be waiting patiently for day 4 and some explanations about the farm in which Seth was in, hopefully withouth encountering Siro, if we'll encounter him I'll personally give him a sucker punch for whatever he did to Seth.

P.S I'm gonna ruin the mood again, sorry. Again I noticed a misspelling before the treasure room and after the Endomycha scene. You wrote at the end "Roof aboce" I think you may have intended to write "Roof above".
It's really a minor error, not even worth noticing, so don't be hard on yourself

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Okay first of all, I LOVE THAT MAGAZINE COVER HAHAHAHA
That's one of my favourite things evveeerrrrr!!! Thank you so much for putting time and effort in to make that!! I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier, I didn't get the notification at all! And please don't feel pressured to make things for me, just the fact that you read my visual novel is enough!! But I love your fanart and stuff so much, it makes me very happy to know I have real fans like you!!! :3

Yes, I put a lot of effort into the music - especially the little cutscene I did there! It took so long to get it timed just right - but I'm so happy you appreciate it! I even use the music player myself now when I'm coding! 

{SPOILERS AHEAD]
Hehe, I enjoyed the cooking part! I just thought something nice and calming was appropriate before the storm that was the endomycha. HAHA, I did think about 50 shades actually in that joke. But I haven't watched it cause I'm gay.

HAHAHA, I see you've looked into the files to find that I called it a demented shark lol. It's so fuckin' gross but that's what aesthetic the Black Colony is going for! Horror and intimidation!!

Yessss... I'm still trying to get better at drawing, but I very much enjoyed drawing gay furry p***! I think the one of Lucifer was probably my best!! That whole thing with the endomycha was kind of a reflection of myself and how during my darkest times, my um, primal instincts have always been there to save me. Most of the time, anyway. And I think it's something people don't talk about enough considering it's completely normal and literally the main thing we're put on the planet to do/feel.

Thank you for that Touch Me Lullaby scene... that was really powerful, and very sad. I'm sorry that the stuff I've made has caused you to create such sad imagery. But you've done such an amazing job at capturing the essence of the song and its sadness... the lullaby itself is only a small snippet on loop of the original song, but... I felt it necessary to just keep it on a constant loop to ensure the reader feels uneasy and disoriented. To me, the song symbolises the last thing you hear before death - which is why I gave the option for you to choose to die while the song fades out and the game exits. I've been in that place myself so many times, so it's cathartic to be able to experience it in game.

Yes, Siro can go fuck himself. Don't worry we'll get to him and The Farm eventually!! Unfortunately, sometimes, when some Kalightians are grown, they come out as assholes who need to be put back in the ground :)
And thanks for the spelling error check!! I knew I would forget something!!

Again, thank you so much Bon! I'm sorry for the long message, but I had to reply to your entire comment! I look forward to them very much. But no pressure!! I'm currently working on the next update right now, and let me tell you, things are intense!! There's drama, tense situations, violence, crime and even more sexual stuff to come!! It's honestly one of the most jam-packed updates ever - and I've reworked every sprite! Please look forward to it!! 
Thank you so much again <3 <3 <3

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Oh shucks (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
It's the least I could offer since reading your stuff actually helps me too, especially since it's something that a person who was close to death multiple times and the stuff you write it's not all "Doom and Gloom" so it really helps.
Shame my primal instincts are basically the same as B-man Philocision, meaning almost inexistent BUT not all is lost, I just gotta have confidence in myself (I've got to be more fierce if I wanna have a chance with the definition of "Potential boyfriend" of Reuben).

I'm also trying to get better at drawing, I hope that it won't disturb you if I use some of your sprites to get some of the fanarts done.
I'll get better at it and soon maybe I'll do something decent.

For now though, ENJOY THE CHRISTMAS! If I get any coal from santa I'll stash them until we see Siro so that I can throw them at him.
I'll be waiting, patiently and exitedly, for the next update.

TAKE CARE! AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°  *Virtual hugs*

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Naww, your drawings are awesome!! The one you did of Neo with the Sun Dagger was actually amazing!! To the point where I wanted to draw in that style too! The muzzle and the eyes were everything!! So don’t doubt yourself please!! It’s one of my favourite things!!

And of course you can use my sprites for fan art, I don’t mind! It’s just really flattering that someone even wants to make fan art of my work. :)

It’s okay! It’s hard to be confident when you feel like you’re not good enough… I know what that feels like all too well. But the more you try, the more likely you’ll succeed! Even if you fail at any of your endeavours, like I did for a very very long time, it’s never really a failure because you’re getting better each time! That’s what kept me at it, even when I just wanted to quit because it seemed like I could never get better.

And hey, it’s okay if you’re not comfortable with those instincts. It took me a very long time to be okay with it, you just have to embrace the innate joy in it and throw away the stigma! 

You have a wonderful Christmas too, my wonderful fan!! And thank you for engaging in my work as always. I am forever grateful!!
(P.S. Don’t throw your coal at poor Siro!! Sharpen it, infuse it with iliocide and kill him instead. Gotta show mercy!!)

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