I like your imaginative take on the theme. I had to read this when I saw it was a vampire story as mine is also. I enjoyed it though I am not sure of Inya's fate, though I think I do.
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Yay, vampire gang :D
Considering the word limit, I decided against narrating the full course of events in favor of spotlighting those parts that seemed the most interesting. I hope the implication of what is going to happen immediately after the story's conclusion is somewhat clear, but anything after that had to be left to the reader's imagination.