INSANE artwork man. Felt Fully complete on that aspect. It was slightly hard to see at times and shame about the bugs tbh but the artwork alone for the time frame is very very impressive. The poetry aspect also makes the storyline more immersive and interesting as well. The voice at first felt great with the comic book style story telling but in the game I think a more softer voice would fit really well with the characters.
A Gorgeous submission - you should definitely work more on this!