Very strong entry. The setup was well done. I could only wish for a less impersonal narration, but that may just be personal preference. Great job!
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That was a deliberate choice :P I wanted to tell the origin of my headcannon faction, as I usually do with games like this. In 40k it was my Tachyon Shadows, in OPR it's my Void Fang Mercenaries :D the intent was to be more of a 'bird's eye view', sort of like a codex entry as someone else mentioned. Either way thank you for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it o7