Rating no. 21
Here's the list of stuff to fix/improve in:
- Level complete text is broken (I assume because of a bad font)
- Camera movement is way too snappy for no reason but I see what you were trying to do (camera look ahead it's not necessary here because it's not a fast platformer, you could just zoom the camera out more instead)
- Player movement is glitchy, you can basically fly if you keep hitting your head at the ceiling. It's basic but I guess that's fine for a game like this.
- Add a way to skip text.
- Never make long monologues that you need to scroll to see the entirety of, nobody will actually read it; at least split them up into smaller chunks so they fit the textbox.
- Stop using the unity default font, even if it's not that, use something that's more stylized and fits the game more; you can find a lot of free fonts on dafont.com or google fonts
- The player animations are really weird, especially the jump one which looks like an idle animation.