Wow, everything is so detailed. The ambience you create is so well crafted. From the writing the the extraordinary sound design and use. The lighting was spot on. This definitely felt like a good horror shortfilm and I loved it very much! Congratulations on making this great game/experience, i can't believe you made it in little over a week!
Only thing that might affect your overall ratings is how well this fits the theme of mode. It feels like you were already planning on building this and tried to find a justification to fit it into this jam. Still, it doesn't change the fact that you should be proud of what you made, and I wish the best of luck for your next projects!