The way this composition builds drama and tension is really compelling and engaging, and I like how well it supports the narrative you set up. I also really like how you used a variety of different figurations and techniques on the piano to create a diverse palette of textures throughout the piece. The only things for me are, the volume is sometimes a bit low, and I think this piece, after all of that drama and tension you build, could have an even more impactful ending. Great job though, I enjoyed it a lot!