Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate the effort that went into it and I'm just gonna say that Children of Morn is far from being a finished game and there is still plenty of new content and fine-tuning ahead. I'd love it if you were to keep playing and let me know your thoughts again a year or two from now.
PS: I can't say anything about the story without spoilers, but let me just tell you that I have plenty in store for the story of the game. This mystery is far from being solved.
I trust you have great ideas in store :) Keep going and keep it cool. I am sure it will turn into a great game.
At the same time, I remain adamant in my feedback, that I believe the early hours of the game need story refactoring to make it more relateable and make a genuine connection with the MC. So it is less about what is yet to come, and more about what we already have in hand today :)