Really beautiful! I enjoyed it a lot. A couple bits of feedback:
- In the first section towards the end, there's the voice-over, I wanted to be able to understand it but it was a bit too muddy with effects (I was using good headphones). I could only understand a few words.
- I kinda feel like that psychadelic 'oily' effect that gets stronger towards the end of the last section would be better if it wasn't tied to the HMD, but instead existed in the world independent of you and just moved with you, but not with your head movement.