Just finished reading the pdf and I'm very excited to play the hostess to a game of this. That said I do have some (hopefully constructive) criticism.
I'd say the game could benefit from elaborating a little more on the rules, as it can feel a little intimidating to read through them, as short as they are, in their current more compact state. Additionally I'd also argue that it could do with more fluff text and maybe tips on how to run certain things? But I do admit that that one is just my preference.
Otherwise? Very excited to dm this! Great work! :)