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I'm glad you liked it! Regarding the thing that bothered you: it is never stated explicitly, but there are clues in the story of what the "secret" is. To me it felt more interesting and more tasteful to leave it at that. And although it isn't mentioned overtly later on, it does influence Grace's actions significantly.

I hope it makes more sense to you now

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Yeah, I did realize some of those clues about her past but it was still kind of unclear to me. Don't get me wrong, having those clues scattered around and influencing her actions did make it interesting to theorize about what could be that secret. To be honest, what bothered me in particular was the fact of her telling Jack about it and then the game simply "hiding" it from you... maybe the real issue was just my own curiosity.

I also felt like it could be more interesting if the story developed more about that "secret" as it would make you sympathize even more with Grace, but that's just an idea of mine. She's a great character overall.

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Just by curiosity, what inspired you to make this VN ?

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I felt I could add my own little twist to the yandere archetype, specifically regarding characters' motivation. Another reason I made it was to see how well my writing would be received by a wider audience, since before this I'd only shown it to my friends.

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Turns out it was a great idea. I hope you keep up with your great work!

I think she was molested by a family member or something like that. The reason she approached Jack in the first place and started talking to him was because she thought he didn't look like the type of guy to use someone. Also, after Grace tells Jack about what happened, Jack asks in exasperation if there's anything they could do about it. If it were a death or something like that he would have offered his condolences, as nothing could possibly be done about that. But him asking if there was anything to be done would be EXACTLY what I would say to someone who was... Well. Yeah... 


Anyway. I really liked this VN Andy!!!!!!! Is there another one coming out anytime soon?