This has been my favorite game of the jam so far. I hope you guys like, win or something.
The mechanics are solid. The level design is phenomenal. The music is fantastic and the writing is immersive and mysterious. The graphics are a bit on the basic side but they get the job done and really set the mood. I loved how I could change the music and the moving platforms at will. Instead of having to wait around for moving platforms, they have to wait for you! Often I would speed up or slow down time just so I could hear the music while reading the text.
Now! Feedback! Wall jumping feels a little difficult, this is just a polish issue and not a design issue necessarily. Also, when objects are moving very fast, you tend to clip through them, which makes using the fast forward options kind of unreasonable. (most of the time I would switch between stop time and time forward to get a kind of slo-mo.) I wish there were a part where you had to make something go super fast to launch yourself into the air, but this is basically impossible because you clip through anything going that fast.
One more thing, the font you chose for the text doesn't have an apostraphe (') which becomes super obvious whenever there's a blank space where there should be one. There were a few grammar errors, but not enough to hinder my enjoyment of the story.
I'd love to see this expanded into a full game someday. It is super legit! Maybe you could even go to the center of the earth? Great job and good luck!