Okay. Here are some thoughts on the writing so far, it's pretty great. All characters except for one seem to have a purpose within the story. Everyone except for Baxter Ward. I get that he is supposed to be more of a background character but he needs to do more other than "And Baxter just stood there unaffected by what just happened with a smirk on his face." Once is fine, but he's no longer interesting when he almost always gets described at great length by that in the story. It's irritating after a while.
But that's my only problem with the writing.