Time for the review of version 1.0.2! I hope you had a very good winter holiday and happy 2024, friend!
1. Every time I wake up, an error happens because the 'rentValue' is undefined. I can just hit ignore to continue with the game, though.
2. I'd go back and grammar-check the intro section. "Looing" is not a word.
3. One of the images for the naked photoshoot causes an error. Number 4, to be precise.
4. One of the images for the naked photoshoot just doesn't show up at all, though this could be related to image 4.
5. One of the images in "porn movie" isn't centered properly. Do you think you could adjust it so that it's in the center and not at the bottom without changing the image? (It's the one where someone is behind Furina and there are hearts floating around her head.)
6. Did you buff the amount of happiness the escort option takes? It feels like I lose way more from it now. After one escort, Furina starts crying herself to sleep. I'd probably nerf it a little bit. 35 happiness is a bit much.
7. Furina isn't naked in one of the "naked photoshoots." (not really a problem. It's just funny, like the 'lewd' photoshoot in the advertising photoshoot images.)
8. Thanks to the added images in each of the photoshoots, they feel more fleshed out now. (Also, don't think I didn't notice the ribbon images. The red on Furina's blue looks very good. I still miss the original image a bit, but these are worthwhile alternatives.) However, maybe adding more types of fetishes in the fetish porn movie would be beneficial, since right now it only seems like these are two main options. The ribbons are great, but if there are too many of them and not enough of other things, it gets a little stale.
9. I still miss the original 'happier' image for the "hookup" option. I don't know if you can get it back or not. I still really think that adding it back to differentiate "hookup" from "escort" would be beneficial.
10. I am very happy to see the apron-only option finally has not one, but two images now! I wonder where we can go from here. Maybe Furina could try working at the café naked/topless in the future? Hmmm...
11. You removed the small drugs. Nice. I never used those anyway.
12. Random idea time! Maybe at some point, there could be a way to increase the stamina that Furina has per day, such as by working out or something. This is just something I thought of while playing, since I either had to sleep or buy stamina in order to see most of the fetish movie images.
13. You don't have to do this if you don't want, but I have seen other people on Itch.io and Newgrounds.com do this. If you want, for the next update, you could create a "new game" of sorts. Basically, release version 1.0.3 as a standalone game and then more people can discover this game in the latest games tab. I think that having more fans of this game besides me would be nice.
Overall, this demo has quite a few improvements to the previous version (see the added images and slight corrections), but the errors bring it down a little bit. (see the rentValue) This is also definitely a smaller update than 1.0.1 to 1.0.2, but that’s not necessarily a bad thing. I am looking forward to version 1.0.3. The things you mentioned in the post above sound promising.