Thank you so much, I really appreciate it, I was the sole writer so i only spend the 1st and 2nd day writing as day 3 and 4 I had to be directing everyone.
I do agree with you, the start is a tiny bit rough, especially some early typos that might throw off a new player, but after you read the same thing so many times after making so many changes your eyes start playing tricks on you and reading what's supposed to be there you know?
As for a more detailed backstory, if there is demand for it I will make anther version of the game and fix all the issues i find while adding some more context, we'll see.