Welp, I played as much of it as I could but I ended up with the crash just as I was about to name the new caravan. But you already seem to know about that. I hope you bother to fix it later.
Is the potion quest broken in the latest version? I didn't write down what the alchemist wanted and he doesn't repeat himself.
The fight with the big shrimp was surprisingly epic. Fisherman was the clear MVP with his heals because I hadn't figured out how to use magic yet.
The writing in general is a lot of fun.
Stuff I noticed broken while I was playing:
A lot of places, Lillith's dialogue isn't blue and has a [1] next to it. Also saw it with the old caravan leader once.
Healer doesn't seem to heal you when you dance?
Beast trader doesn't actually take your money when you buy the beast, which nicely balances out the lack of free healing.
Okay wow it took me a while to notice but the "magic" option in combat isn't there. I thought I just didn't have magic but the field is just blank, it works fine.
Aw man, just as I was getting into the swing of it, it crashed when I was trying to name the new caravan.
"$game_actors is not defined"