Skip to main content

Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
Tags
(+1)

Playing through this a bit more properly this time, we shall see how far I get. I will be writing down my thoughts along the way. 

Early bible quotes, even as an atheist, I am in favor of this. If your game goes bible, might as well go full bible. Interesting transition into the monstergirl lore as well. 

I like the protagonist so far, Gabriel has a good mindset. 

Father John works out. Damien looking sleepy, very good. 

The expressions on the characters are really well done and creative. 

Clover and Eva are both lovely, not a Sera fan, yet. 

Background visuals are all extremely well put together. 

Aria is nice too, the confessional scene was interesting. Overall it is an interesting premise, Catholicism and a "dating-sim style VN". Writing is steeped in it, which makes it fresh and different in a way. 

This is even more evident with the teaching of the nun in the first classroom scene. There is a lot here I would not agree with, but that does not really impact my appreciation of this work. 

Gabe does seem to be a bit of a blank slate, not a lot of personality going on here just yet, except for being a representation of the morals the game wants to convey. I get that some personal flaws, or some quirkier characteristics might not fit the purpose of this project, and it's a bit too early for me to form any more definitive opinion concerning the story and the characters overall. 

Except that Eva is the best, this is evident right away. 

I should mention I am playing this alongside a friend, I chose socializing for the first major choice, she took gaming. 

Not that impressed with the music, kind of bland, but I have some offbeat sensibilities. I think the songs do get the job done and fit a VN. Perhaps a really strong main-theme or two might be good to mix things up, this might already be in as far as I know. I am at the gym sequence. 

The basketball query is funny, you get Wren path points if you choose Bruce Lee? Stephen Curry, naturally. My friend chose Bruce. 

Clover library scene very good, not gonna lie. Eva scene even better. This art is gorgeous. 

Book recommendation section, now this I can get behind. I have read a surprising amount of these titles, just a few of the philosophy ones though. But no romance recommendations? After having it being teased earlier? For shame. Have not read Earthsea either, although the series has been recommended to me, really should. I think you might like the Ender books and some of the Atwood works. 

Will be playing more soon, it's a big game. 

Thanks for the honest review!  As for not agreeing with stuff, that's okay as long as you still like the rest!  I read plenty of VNs whose philosophies I may not agree with, but get what it's going for.  So long as it doesn't seem like I'm trying to push it down anyone's throat!

Gabe does seem to come across as a blank slate, but that's part of the intention.  He's a weak Catholic, but that might not be apparent to most people at first glance.  I also need him to be somewhere in the middle to able to relate to the wide variety of interests such as gaming to basketball and martial arts, etc.  I'm sure there's room for me to do better at least.

It's a shame you don't like the music.  That's one of my favorite things to direct musicians on.  It could be that it's too safe, but I made sure to put in examples similar to other works that I enjoyed to make sure to fit the themes for different directions of the game.  Maybe once I get unique character themes in, it'll have more personality?

I'd highly recommend Earthsea as LeGuin has been a great fantasy author.  I'm sure I would like Ender series and perhaps Atwood.

Hope to hear more opinions when you and your friend finish!

I think some character themes might do this game very well. Concerning the music it does have very high production values, its clean and well put together, but what I felt it lacked was indeed personality. Out of the tracks I have heard so far they all fit the scenes but there was not much I latched on to or something that made me feel: I want to hear this again. 

Character themes is probably a perfect solution, even a solo piano with some clear cut and distinct melodies will probably add that extra feeling. Such melodies, depending on how they are put together, could also fade in and out over other songs as a character has a specific moment.

 I would also consider creating a strong main theme eventually, something to use for trailers and such. I would go full cathedral pop if I were you, a blend between organs and something like a classic anime intro. It would fit the blend of themes the game has as well and you could reuse melodies from the theme in key scenes. Just a thought. 

Hopefully I will feel I have some time to read this summer, Earthsea will be put on the list. The Ender books has some religious themes running in the background of the narrative which you might appreciate , even though the author is a mormon and not a catholic. This is more apparent in the second book than the first. Among Atwoods works I think my favorite is the Oryx and Crake trilogy, it portrays a very specific and dystopian view of the future, but she is overall just an excellent writer, although her thoughts concerning things do not always align with my own. 

(+1)

Speaking of a main trailer theme:

I think as I get closer to an actual release and have more content to show off in a more full trailer, I can get a more full main theme going based on the already present le motifs going on between tracks.  The music in game is only 1/3rd of what's planned anyways so hopefully later more complete sections of the games will inspire emotion and connection to the game