Hello, I played the demo and I love your art style, also, your GUI is so unique, I love it!! Like the sticky note thing where you can move it around?? Genius!! And also the social media screen, though, I'm still kinda confused with the meaning of colors and all that, but since it's still WIP so maybe it will be explained in the future update?
NEXT ONE IS PROBABLY WILL CONTAIN SPOILER, so read at your own risk...
As for the story, so far I enjoyed it!! There's an inconsistency in the NSFW scene on day 1, where MC tells Ren that it's their first time too but then in the next one, MC's monologue says that Ren is bigger than anything else they've ever taken... Where do they get experience from if Ren is their first time lol?? It's nothing major but it's just funny to me.
And I was wondering why when I rejected Theo's invite ended as a bad end...? Since in my perspective, I don't feel comfortable around Theo, as much as I like Elanor, I don't feel the need to force myself to be around Theo even though being around Ren is much more dangerous knowing how he is lol... So... I thought rejecting would be a good choice but then that came to bite back me with the jumpscare xD
So Ren, don't come to me and be jealous since this is also your fault, I have to accept Theo's invitation just to avoid your jumpscare. It would be funnier if there's an option "Fine. But I'm doing this for my own sanity." after I got the jumpscare end xD
Lastly, this is unrelated to the story, but I'm also on my way to making my own game with Renpy and I'm stuck on making a screen of player name input like yours. I wonder if you have any tips regarding that or any GUI-related on renpy? Or you can ignore this question since I don't want to burden or force anyone (^^;;)