I really like your color choices for this one! The story is pretty straightforward, though I like when you lock options and briefly show glitched text. It's a great way to show instability and lack of rational thought.
Honestly what impressed me the most was your screen transitions. The scroll fade looks great, even with Gameboy-style limitations.
It might be helpful to get someone to proofread your dialogue, there's a bunch of small mistakes throughout that are minor annoyances.