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So, I'm not sure if you got into any trouble that ended in you and the other author <span class="NormalTextRun SCXW265944871 BCX0" <deleting<="" span="">deleting the other IF or if you just got stressed out from all the hate comments. I’m not usually one to comment since I like to maintain a neutral viewpoint for every argument. But let me get this straight-</span> 

Main comments (I remember) on other IF: 

-Plagiarizing the percy jackson book plus this is not fanfiction if you used wording in the exact format as Riordan. (Insert pic as proof that it was indeed a PJO fanfiction)

-This twine isn’t good wording it’s terrible and you were sooo lazy with the writing (Response: No, it's because they copied off Rick riordan) Oh yeah! Th<span class="NormalTextRun SCXW139904204 BCX0" <th<="" span="">at’s why we're all upset, thanks.</span> 

-You’re making money off this with Kofi donations! This is a disgrace to PJO and I'm a long-term fan

My POV:

-Yeah, plagiarism is disrespectful but it’s a fanfiction and they're<span class="NormalTextRun SCXW11207198 BCX0" <they’re<="" span=""> using the main plot possibly to build on to that for their own story inspired off of PJO</span>

-Everyone is saying it was lazy writing when the only times you used the writing from riordan was when it was necessary for plot building, from what I remember of the IF you didn’t just copy and paste you wrote your own story then added some sentences from PJO and even shortened them for your fanfiction.

-<span class="NormalTextRun SCXW199381555 BCX0" <there’s<="" span="">There's also a lot more work than all the angry mob is giving you guys credit for, and I understand that writing is difficult. They probably don’t understand since the hardest thing<span class="NormalTextRun SCXW199381555 BCX0" <they’ve<="" span=""> they've </span>accomplished was how to join a twitter mob.</span> I seriously cringed yesterday reading their comments

-The DEFINITION of plagiarism is "The practise of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own.” Most commenters suggested you re-write the sentences used from PJO, but that’s actual plagiarism pretending that it was your og writing and idea, then just taking inspiration from the book. It was clearly fanfiction meant to show admiration towards Riordan’s writing and PJO. It was even labelled as “the lightning thief” so it was 100% not you taking riordan’s work and passing it off as your own. 

-You authors weren’t making money off it and I'm not a legal expert, but it had at least 2-3 paragraphs from the book and since it’s a twine you could never guess what the canon PJO was if you’ve never read it. And no, donations absolutely do not count since it wasn’t pay to read.

-Later on, the plot might’ve changed too and would have even less of Riordan's writings since it was your own story that was a fanfiction off of PJO's problem and setting. 

-People were not just “calling you out” they were harassing you authors for social points when the message that it was plagiarized was delivered multiple times.

-I don’t get why everyone was discouraging PJO fanfiction since they claimed they were such fans. “You don’t have to put one person down to praise another”; which was exactly what they were doing. But I've seen my share of most of the PJO fandom and they harass anyone in the name of Riordan, (the only time it was acceptable was probably the first two movies since Riordan said it wasn't what he wanted). 

-<span class="NormalTextRun SCXW252342659 BCX0" <this="" upsets<="" span="">This upsets me because it reminds me of the angry twitter mob calling out people for taking inspiration from other cultures (often the victim's own) for their non-</span>american accessories and clothing. It’s similar because they harassed the victims who were not culture-appropriating. They were not acting disrespectfully with the clothes. And that mob was acting as if they were part of that culture, which most people from part of that culture were alright with random people respecting and showing admiration with their clothing and culture. As I believe what you were showing with riordan’s writing. But only riordan can say whether or not he found your IF disrespectful.

-In my opinion it was better to just use Riordan's writings instead of re-writing it. Since that would be diminishing riordan’s writings and actually plagiarizing since you’re claiming it as your own. (since im petty I hoped you’d add the book pages to each of riordan’s writings because it would’ve become obvious that those few sentences were not major plot points of canon PJO and the amount of writing you added yourselves would’ve been clear, but I'm not a legal expert so it might’ve gotten you in trouble.) 

I'm also sorry for whatever happened but I understand that you deleted it, I hope you just decided to do what was best for you and the other author and not just respond out of fear of the PJO fandom. I hoped you did whatever was best to bring you peace of mind and not just to satisfy the miserable gremlins of the internet. I also like your and riordan's writings so it was pretty easy to find multiple viewpoints from both sides, which were a bit biased tbh. Not sure if you plan on further addressing the missing IF and sorry if I brought it up I didn't know how else to contact you.

hey there! can i just that i’m really thankful review 😭 i can’t lie and say that the comments in TLT weren’t giving me a headache but it’s the internet and you can’t please everyone, especially if they do not properly read the disclaimers.

the whole point was for the fanfiction to directly mirror PJO’s writing because it was a conversion of the books into a more interactive setting. i thought it’d be fun to add some of my own touches and characters to it but apparently, that was the entire reason for its downfall 😅

i’m rewriting it to add more of my own ideas and word the sentences and paragraphs better. i won’t be changing anything which was the essence of the PJO books because it is still a direct mirror of them and for now, my only concern is the legal aspects of it. although most of that would be solved by making it completely not-for-profit.

people who’d like to read it that way can do it. people who won’t like it shall ignore its existence. but suffice to say, it’s still being worked on and god forbid the plotline and sentences are exactly as they’re written in the books because, i don’t know, i clearly stated that it was supposed to be that way?

thank you again for this comment, i’m glad at least someone got the entire point of the TLT fanfiction.

For whatever it's worth, I agree completely with the previous commenter. I adore the series, and as I expressed in a comment back on the original page for the very first version, I was hella excited about it. While fanfiction is great, being able to actually 'play' the series with my own custom made protagonist? That was a mad cool idea, and everyone who got pissed about it, did so because they didn't even bother to read the disclaimer you made about how it was meant to be a interactive fanfic-ish take on the series, and was made entirely in appreciation for the original work. None of their criticism was valid, because all they wanted to do was kick up a fuss about the entire situation, just because they could do so. Their outrage was entirely selfish, and when boiled down was all simply done because they wanted drama. And you and the other author didn't at all deserve that.

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Hey, I'm so sorry to hear you're being bombarded by people like that. I was only worried about the lifting of words directly from Riordan and what others might think of the Kofi (unlinked) in your description. I'm not sure who decided to go above and beyond to harass you, but I hope you're able to report them on Discord, here, and Tumblr. If you ever need anything, please feel free to reach out. You can find me @trailshome 0r @clamoribusrogamina -- I'm happy to listen to you vent or just shoot the shit or smth.

I've watched other authors get harassed and have been harassed myself. I don't know how much help I can be, but I'm always down to lend an ear to a fellow author. Wishing you the best and am excited for updates to your games. (I adore Moreau sm!!)

Sending you hugs and well wishes!! Don't let those posers get you down! They just want to start something to start something! <3

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hey, I just wanted to say I really like your Lightning Thief interactive. I'm sorry you have to deal with all the people giving hate for it. I'm excited to see future chapters and hopefully the other books. while I love the books it is nice to be able to do your own character design and your interactive has done just that. I wish you the best of luck in the future. (Also, I'm sorry if you didn't want comments on it, I just wanted to give support for an amazing project)