Hi, hoping the game is still developed further, here some remarks:
1. I found a bug: If the MC pays for Rucas and his dinner or pays for Angies and his breakfast, no money is subtracted from the money, which is shown by his phone. I have not found other payments, which are not subtracted.
2. I am confused about some parts of the story: June is caretaker of Charlee, Tiffany and the MC and she have given birth more than once. Is she mother of some or all of these three? Or is she rising them without being the biological mother of any of them? I tend to the later, because all three call her "caretaker" and the two girls and the MC are friends.
3. Tiffany addressed the MC in a way, which shows, as far as I understood it, that he is older than her. Where does this should play, that the currency is $, someone between 18 and 21 is allowed to drink alcohol but Ruca thinks, she has to prevent him from seeing explicit sex scenes on TV? And why has Ruca so much trouble to start a romantic/sexual relationship with the "boy" of her friend? She and MC are adults and not (yet) family related to each other.
4. I think, the text should be dependent, of what happened before. For example, in the scene when MC gets the job as a clerk, the text implies, the MC was never been there even he visits it many times not in the morning.
5. Also the selection of possible scenes should be influenced by what happened before. For example, after doing the pictures with the red clothing for June, the scenes of taking pictures of June in her own cloth with the realtor, her and the MC came up again.
6. When should the school of the MC start? I did not get any hint at it at the time, it should start. The contradicting hints came before: Ruca said at the drive from the train station toher home, it would be one and a half months after that day, which I interpret as around day 45. But June moved before that time and asked before that, why MC is missing school.