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Itch.io User354 days ago

Thanks for sharing this with free licenses!

I will share my experience, thoughts and interpretation of the vn here, I hope that this helps you improve!

SPOILERS BELOW!!!
















EXPERIENCE

  • Just a demo uh? please keep working on it, is a great idea, a person could write a lot on this subject.

  • Writing and narrative flow could be improved…

  • Your art style is very cute!

INTERPRETATION

  • Alright, only the MC can’t see colors. Is some kind of mental health problem, isn’t it? I don’t believe that this is some obscure metaphor about depression though.

  • Did you know about “complete achromatopsia”? It seems that the MC suffers from it, I remember some glasses that fix this.

  • I understand that the MC doesn’t want to reveal that she has a disability. It’s very hard to accept this in a world that always demands the best from you.

  • My interpretation is that this novel has been made to raise awareness about people with vision disabilities!

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Quetzalcoutl354 days ago (1 edit) (+1)

I share the game with libre licenses because I don't like privatizing my content

1. If it is a demo and as I mentioned, one day it will go to Steam

2. The narrative can be improved, of course, your comments help

3. I'm glad you like my art style, I didn't make the backgrounds by the way

4. I didn't know that "Complete Achromatopsia" existed, this is the first time I've heard of it.

Your interpretation is good and it is one of the things I want to give with the novel, I cannot reveal what happens to the protagonist because I would be revealing to you what the whole game is about.

Thank you very much for your comment

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Itch.io User354 days ago

I share the game with libre licenses because I don’t like privatizing my content




Thanks for replying!

I’m aware that I’m making interpretations with just a small fragment of the whole history, is foolish because anything can happens in the future. And by all means, please don’t spoil me the updates. XD

Still, I hope this helps you determine if there’s something to clarify, or if the story speaks correctly to the reader.

Good luck and best wishes!

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