It is easy to claim that a musical piece tells a story, it is a whole different matter to actually do it. I think you did it very well - you take the listener through many places and moments, while remaining connected to the main musical theme. Very interesting.
I have a comment regarding the mix: I don't know if that was on purpose, but the voice at times covers the other sounds. Maybe everything is compressed to allow the voice to make stand out, but it's weird since the voice is quite ethereal. But maybe it's a stylistic choice, I can't tell
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Thanks for listening and commenting!
Also, thanks for pointing out the voice mixing thing! Especially towards the later half, I did make some adjustments to try and get the voice to come through more, and you're right, that did seem to cause the voice to cover up some of the other instruments. I'll look into how I can clean up the mix a bit more going forward.