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A jam submission

Find Your DawnView project page

Submission for RMCC 6
Submitted by BodoTheSerf — 11 hours, 11 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Composition#24.4004.400
Mixing#24.3004.300
Creativity#44.0004.000
Overall#54.0004.000
Challenge#93.3003.300

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Title
Find Your Dawn

Description
(If you had a hard time hearing the motif within the music, the explanation section down below might help guide you to where the motif was integrated into various melodies and accompaniment throughout the piece.)

Overview:

Find Your Dawn is an experimental narrative piece which explored how to tell a story using the provided theme in various different contexts. I tried experimenting with the theme through rhythmic and pitch variations, inverting (vertical flipping of notes), reversing (horizontal flipping of notes), and trying it out in various key and time signatures throughout the piece. I then integrated these variations into the melodies and accompaniment within the music.

The purpose of all of these variations is to build up to the Coda, where the 'original' theme is played as part of the final main melody.

The piece begins in B minor in 6/4, modulates to F# minor in 4/4, then ends on C# minor in 6/4.

For me, this piece is about adversity, despair, hope, and self-discovery. I'm curious to hear about what you guys thought about this piece!


Structure:

Exposition - Interlude - Development A - Development B - Recapitulation - Coda


Explanation:

Exposition: 0:00 - 0:18 (B minor, 6/4)
- The piece begins with a piano playing a melodic fragment ending with an elongated version of the theme, which continues into a melody with a choir that ends with a 'false' variation of the theme that ends on a higher note than it is supposed to be, sounding as if it is asking a question. The piano echoes back another melodic fragment, which again ends with a 'false' variation ending on another unresolved note, before the piece continues into the interlude, the percussion slowly building up along the way.

Interlude: 0:18 - 0:30 (B minor, 4/4)
- The piece takes the building up percussion from the exposition to dive into an interlude with an intense percussion line which masks the fact that the time signature itself is lacking the forward momentum from prior, having switched to the more stable 4/4 time. The voice line sings one more melodic line ending with a 'false' theme variation, as the lower strings push the harmony forward to a modulation to F# minor.

Development A: 0:30 - 1:19 (F# minor, 4/4)
- The piece strips away the percussion and lower strings that were driving the rhythm before, revealing how the momentum from the exposition is all but gone. With just a voice line and a simple piano accompaniment, the piece seems to stagnate, with the melody and rhythm going nowhere. The theme is nowhere to be found, though if you listen closely, you might notice that the synth piano, which seems to be playing sporadic single notes in the background starting from 0:38 , is actually playing an extremely elongated, reversed version of the theme. At 1:06, the voice line sings a slower variant of the theme, but it once again turns out to be a 'false' one, ending on a lower, unresolved note.

Development B: 1:19 - 2:10 (F# minor, 4/4)
- The B section starts with the voice line singing an inverted variant of the theme starting at 1:18. Throughout this section, the voice line sings melodies that integrate the inverted variant of the theme, and the harmonies begin to move once more, and the accompaniment gradually builds up towards the modulation to C# minor.

Recapitulation: 2:10 - 2:26 (C# minor, 6/4)
- The piece returns to the exposition, though now in C# minor. The piece starts moving forward again in 6/4, and the original melodies return, though this time the themes are played with the 'correct' notes, resolving properly. As the drums pick up, the piano once again echoes back a melodic fragment, though this time it ends with an upward motion as the music enters the Coda.

Coda: 2:26 - 3:20(C # minor, 6/4)
- The piano plays a melodic line that begins with the theme this time. However, the first time the melody plays, the theme has syncopations in it, making it seem a bit hesitant, and creating a sense of resistance. However, when the piano plays the melody again at 2:43 with the help of the voices from the development section, the theme is finally played properly, with the correct notes and rhythm. After a brief interlude at 3:00 with a melody that incorporates the inverted theme once again, the music finishes properly with a sequence of themes building up to a cadence on C#. The music finishes with the arpeggio sequence from the exposition becoming the main theme at the very end.


Thanks for listening, I hope you enjoyed it!

Plugins used
Base Cubase 12 plugins (Padshop, HaLion Sonic, etc.)
Spitfire Audio: Cinematic Percussion, Cinematic Pads, Felt Piano, Intimate Grand Piano, Abbey Road One Foundations
Vocaloid 4 + 5
SCC Taiko Drums

Link(s) to your submission
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WjNuflDAmUU (includes subtitles for the lyrics)

https://soundcloud.com/yujisatomusic/find-your-dawn

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

We recognize your style with the fast piano notes (which made you famous at RMCC#5).

It's splendid, you're very talented. It's great pleasure to listen to.

I love the passage at 2'00" with that surprising G on "And now". It's a real beauty!

I'm really happy to see a new talented competitor. It makes me want to push myself when I hear what you produce.

Welcome to these jams, you're the new adversary to beat :D

Submitted(+1)

Wow this is another level :O The melody in developement B seems to go a bit under or lost. I find it a bit "muffled" or unclear at times, but beside that, it is really beautifully made. And the singing adds a nice touch to it! You can hear that you poured in quite some work here. :)

Submitted(+1)

Simply beautiful, I love it! I would’ve loved the lyrics actually being sang, but it is really cool! Maybe the motif is a little hidden, but overall a great song for the ending of a game!

Developer

Thanks for the the comment! For the the lyrics, they are being sung, but about 80% of it is actually in Japanese, so the subtitles in the Youtube video are translations of those. And yes, I've gotten comments about how the motif is a bit not obvious, I'll be more careful about that going forward!

Submitted

Oh now I hear the japanese, I cannot understand most of it but I hear it now, I’m kind of scared now.

Submitted(+1)

It is easy to claim that a musical piece tells a story, it is a whole different matter to actually do it. I think you did it very well - you take the listener through many places and moments, while remaining connected to the main musical theme. Very interesting.

I have a comment regarding the mix: I don't know if that was on purpose, but the voice at times covers the other sounds. Maybe everything is compressed to allow the voice to make stand out, but it's weird since the voice is quite ethereal. But maybe it's a stylistic choice, I can't tell

Developer(+1)

Thanks for listening and commenting!

Also, thanks for pointing out the voice mixing thing! Especially towards the later half, I did make some adjustments to try and get the voice to come through more, and you're right, that did seem to cause the voice to cover up some of the other instruments. I'll look into how I can clean up the mix a bit more going forward.

Submitted(+1)

Wow. You’ve created something very cinematic and just…beautiful. I could really feel the emotion in this one, listening to it felt like a journey in itself. My favorite sections were the interlude, the recap, and the coda. Great work!

Developer

Thanks for listening, glad you enjoyed it!

Submitted(+1)

uh-uh Not fair.

The fact that we are in the same competition is crazy because how am I supposed to be as good as this?

I guess the only thing I could say could have been done better if only slightly is to introduce the Motif slightly earlier but that might just be me not hearing it earlier where it might be. First I hear it is at 1:07 which isn't even that far into the song anyway.

of the 2 songs of yours I have heard I can certainly see a style you have since it is quite similar to your last song. and that style is too good for being in small scale productions.

Developer(+1)

Hey, thanks so much for your comment and kind words! I really appreciate it.

For the motif, it is there from the beginning, but I deliberately composed this so it doesn't really take center stage until the Coda at the end. For example, the opening piano phrase from 0:03 to 0:05 has the motif at the tail end of the phrase in a elongated form, and the piano + choir melody from 0:05 to 0:10 also has the motif starting at 0:08. Also, during the Development A, the synth piano playing single notes in the background at 0:38, 0:51, 0:57, 1:04, and 1:06 is playing a reversed, extremely elongated variation of the motif. 

I was playing around with how to naturally integrate the motif into the various melodies and accompaniment, but maybe I should've highlighted it more when it appears... I'll keep that in mind going forward!

Thanks for listening!